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"King of the Rof"
On a very stormy July 18, of the year 1695, at the battlefield of Xyoxi near the realm of DarkHaven, Pach, aged 16 seasons, and the army of Darkhaven, including King Phyadazirex and his sons, Xycaprion and Epsion, stood prepared for battle against the fearsome Rof. On a brown horse sat King Kinshawn BloodPool, a very arrogant ruler, with long black hair and dark eyes. He was about 73 inches tall and a little rotund, but not too much that made him appear fat though.
On a raven colored mare named Xyephen, beside Kinshawn was a very young immortal with long auburn hair and hell-pit dark eyes. This young menace of 76 inches in height was true dread, this was Rofi, the warlord Prince of Rof. He was called the Devastator and for good reason. He was known to obliterate entire communities in one felled swoop. He had a war cry that could send a force that lay everything in its path to waste. All who knew Rofi feared this child of Death. He was Rofi which mean, 'of the Rof' a title denoting immeasurable power and strength.
Pach sat regally atop Orion looking evey bit like a king ready to go to battle, he was dressed in only a white ruffled shirt and black leather breeches. His blond hair held back with a black satin ribbon. He was armed with nothing but the Gauntlet of Power, Phyadazirex sat mounted on his horse, Zedda and ready for battle, armed to the hilt. The storm unleashed it;s mighty fury and the rain fell in sheets. That was when Rofi gave the order to attack, the rain would act as a cover for the warriors.
The two armies met in mortal battle and it was a bloody hellacious war to be certain. Many fell on that tragic scene of bitter warfare, and Kinshawn was one of the major contriutorscontributors therein. He finally met Pach on the battlefield and swung his mace and dislodged the little Champion form his horse. Orion stopped still as a statue. Pach was dazed but not out so far that he could not defend himself still.
He swung the Gauntlet of Power around so that it caught Kinshawn on the jaw and Pach cried out, "Sovianet sivai monoi!" Forming a deadly ice sword in his hands which he used to impale Kinshawn with, the King of Rof screamed in pain then died with a shudder.
Rofi felt this immediatlyimmediately and saw his father lying dead in a heap. "Father?" The Prince of Rof said softly at first, then he noticed Pach standing over the body and that fuelled Rofi's rage, he then changed his voice to the devastating war cry, he leveled all around him for five full miles, Pach and the Royals of DarkHaven escaped barely as the devastaingdevastating menace saw Pach as the murderer of his father. The death dealing Prince came after Pach, who eluded him by forming a portal out of harms way along with his friends from DarkHaven.
"For now we are safe Johann. But I fear the Devastator will come for you now. Please exercise caution my friend." Phyadazirex said to Pach back in DarkHaven. "I shall my friend." Pach promised and departed for Vienna.
He no sooner got back to Vienna then a hellacious storm slammed into our fair city, doing insurmountable damage to many structures. The Green Dragon inn stood strong against the fury of Rofi's storm, we knew it was Rofi as the lightning was an unearthly blood red and Rofi's surname is BloodRain. Suddenly, with no warning except the storm, Rofi appeared in the town square and proceeded to obliterate Saint Mary's Cathedral where Ignazi had taken up residence. Along with the giant cathedral, many houses and businesses were destroyed, that is, unless a cat lived there, Rofi would never harm cats as he knew them to be the embodiment of beautiful women.
Pach ran as fast as he could for the ruins of the south side of Vienna to see if anyine could be saved, "Here you have come to face me, and meet your death!" Came an icy cold voice of pure hate. Pach turned and there stood Rofi. "Mary Magdelaine!Magdalene! Rofi BloodRain!" The Champion shouted as Antonio and J. Sebastian ran to their friends side. I saw Rofi as he drew a deadly silver crossbow and in a heartbeat, shot J. Sebastian, killing the Saxon boy. Antonio fainted and Pach had to react very quickly as this menace named Rofi would wait for no one.
Pach scooped up Antonio with his mind shroud and whisked him back to Saint Peter's. "Keep him safe." Pach said to a small gray kitten he placed in Antonio's arms. Seretto became a friend of the church. Then he went to face Rofi. "Devastator! It is me you want!" Pach shouted, "Indeed it is!" Rofi shouted and came after Pach with a fury, Pach used his mind shroud to form an ice crossbow and armed it with an ice arrow, he shot it at Rofi who easily deflected it then used his own power of the mind to destroy Pach's crossbow. This startled Pach and the young one took off in a dead sprint for anywhere else.
Finally Pach ran to his small house just built a couple of weeks prior and in the blink of an eye, Rofi exploded it into spinters.splinters. Pach ran as fast as his legs could carry him for the forest, on his way there, he formed a portal to Darkhaven. He ran to Phyadazirex and pleaded him to make it appear as though Pach had been killed in Darkhaven. Phyadazirex oblidged and set an appearance of Pach's lifeless body before his throne.
When Rofi came and saw this he confronted Phyadazirex, "Why would you kill yiouryour companion?" "He set the Devil called Rofi on us, we had to kill him to calm your fire Lord of Rof." Phyadazirex said, Rofi accepted this for now, but it would not take long before the young one knew better. But for now he stayed quiet, planning his next move.
He was crowned King of the Rof in a weeks time, when he conducted his fathers funeral and said at last, "Be done and be damned!" He always thought his father foolish and weak.
While Vienna surrected from the carnage of Rofi's visit, Ignazi stayed with Antonio and everyone helped with the re-building. Pach had never faced a menace like Rofi before, the new King of Rof genuinlygenuinely frightened Pach so that the young Champion feared to face the fiery Rofi BloodRain. He made no pretences to the contrary either.
KOR:1695
On a raven colored mare named Xyephen, beside Kinshawn was a very young immortal with long auburn hair and hell-pit dark eyes. This young menace of 76 inches in height was true dread, this was Rofi, the warlord Prince of Rof. He was called the Devastator and for good reason. He was known to obliterate entire communities in one felled swoop. He had a war cry that could send a force that lay everything in its path to waste. All who knew Rofi feared this child of Death. He was Rofi which mean, 'of the Rof' a title denoting immeasurable power and strength.
Pach sat regally atop Orion looking evey bit like a king ready to go to battle, he was dressed in only a white ruffled shirt and black leather breeches. His blond hair held back with a black satin ribbon. He was armed with nothing but the Gauntlet of Power, Phyadazirex sat mounted on his horse, Zedda and ready for battle, armed to the hilt. The storm unleashed it;s mighty fury and the rain fell in sheets. That was when Rofi gave the order to attack, the rain would act as a cover for the warriors.
The two armies met in mortal battle and it was a bloody hellacious war to be certain. Many fell on that tragic scene of bitter warfare, and Kinshawn was one of the major contriutorscontributors therein. He finally met Pach on the battlefield and swung his mace and dislodged the little Champion form his horse. Orion stopped still as a statue. Pach was dazed but not out so far that he could not defend himself still.
He swung the Gauntlet of Power around so that it caught Kinshawn on the jaw and Pach cried out, "Sovianet sivai monoi!" Forming a deadly ice sword in his hands which he used to impale Kinshawn with, the King of Rof screamed in pain then died with a shudder.
Rofi felt this immediatlyimmediately and saw his father lying dead in a heap. "Father?" The Prince of Rof said softly at first, then he noticed Pach standing over the body and that fuelled Rofi's rage, he then changed his voice to the devastating war cry, he leveled all around him for five full miles, Pach and the Royals of DarkHaven escaped barely as the devastaingdevastating menace saw Pach as the murderer of his father. The death dealing Prince came after Pach, who eluded him by forming a portal out of harms way along with his friends from DarkHaven.
"For now we are safe Johann. But I fear the Devastator will come for you now. Please exercise caution my friend." Phyadazirex said to Pach back in DarkHaven. "I shall my friend." Pach promised and departed for Vienna.
He no sooner got back to Vienna then a hellacious storm slammed into our fair city, doing insurmountable damage to many structures. The Green Dragon inn stood strong against the fury of Rofi's storm, we knew it was Rofi as the lightning was an unearthly blood red and Rofi's surname is BloodRain. Suddenly, with no warning except the storm, Rofi appeared in the town square and proceeded to obliterate Saint Mary's Cathedral where Ignazi had taken up residence. Along with the giant cathedral, many houses and businesses were destroyed, that is, unless a cat lived there, Rofi would never harm cats as he knew them to be the embodiment of beautiful women.
Pach ran as fast as he could for the ruins of the south side of Vienna to see if anyine could be saved, "Here you have come to face me, and meet your death!" Came an icy cold voice of pure hate. Pach turned and there stood Rofi. "Mary Magdelaine!Magdalene! Rofi BloodRain!" The Champion shouted as Antonio and J. Sebastian ran to their friends side. I saw Rofi as he drew a deadly silver crossbow and in a heartbeat, shot J. Sebastian, killing the Saxon boy. Antonio fainted and Pach had to react very quickly as this menace named Rofi would wait for no one.
Pach scooped up Antonio with his mind shroud and whisked him back to Saint Peter's. "Keep him safe." Pach said to a small gray kitten he placed in Antonio's arms. Seretto became a friend of the church. Then he went to face Rofi. "Devastator! It is me you want!" Pach shouted, "Indeed it is!" Rofi shouted and came after Pach with a fury, Pach used his mind shroud to form an ice crossbow and armed it with an ice arrow, he shot it at Rofi who easily deflected it then used his own power of the mind to destroy Pach's crossbow. This startled Pach and the young one took off in a dead sprint for anywhere else.
Finally Pach ran to his small house just built a couple of weeks prior and in the blink of an eye, Rofi exploded it into spinters.splinters. Pach ran as fast as his legs could carry him for the forest, on his way there, he formed a portal to Darkhaven. He ran to Phyadazirex and pleaded him to make it appear as though Pach had been killed in Darkhaven. Phyadazirex oblidged and set an appearance of Pach's lifeless body before his throne.
When Rofi came and saw this he confronted Phyadazirex, "Why would you kill yiouryour companion?" "He set the Devil called Rofi on us, we had to kill him to calm your fire Lord of Rof." Phyadazirex said, Rofi accepted this for now, but it would not take long before the young one knew better. But for now he stayed quiet, planning his next move.
He was crowned King of the Rof in a weeks time, when he conducted his fathers funeral and said at last, "Be done and be damned!" He always thought his father foolish and weak.
While Vienna surrected from the carnage of Rofi's visit, Ignazi stayed with Antonio and everyone helped with the re-building. Pach had never faced a menace like Rofi before, the new King of Rof genuinlygenuinely frightened Pach so that the young Champion feared to face the fiery Rofi BloodRain. He made no pretences to the contrary either.
KOR:1695
